Review Detail of BlackSnowAngel in Live Broadcast: Doolittle asks "Hawk Eyes" at The Start

This is my first fab fiction i had ever read, so i didn't know what i was expecting. It was a nice twist of experience, and to have my favorites character show up was pleasant. I like the meshing of the worlds. The story is easy to follow but there is obly like 3 chapters for now. There are quite a bit of potential to the story, keep it up.