Review Detail of JcnPeng in My Idarian Lover

Good job on the editing. It's a lot better than before, a lot less obvious mistakes. The story is a bit hard to follow, because it swings around a lot. But I'm not a good person to judge romance, so that might be the reason. The character design seems quite good. But I would like to see what the characters look like, especially the MC. You are uploading more chapters recently, so that's good. Too early for world background, so I can't give a review on that.