Review Detail of Taddena in Harem Goddess System
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As a douluo fan, I give it 10/3. The plot is awful, people are like robots, showing a 10,000 year old soul ring and these are just what I saw in the first episode. The future may be worse or better, but this beginning immediately turned me off from the series.
Harem Goddess System
Daoist_Longran23
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well thank for you're supported but im not that weak for crying just from this critic im well yeah just a noob but well yeah thanks for your support
PENUNGGUNOVELEMAS:well sorry for miscom i agree with you too in the eemotion lackness but what can you say from a Newbie author? a Great fanfic novel? you just too harsh to a newbie. if you like this you break this newbie passion
bro do you have a problem understanding the meaning? where did i say i love yu xiaogang? The story may be wish-fulfilling, but it's one of the worst because the plot is bad and the characters lack emotion. Also, as I said, I love douluo fan-fics and I've read a lot. Just because a story is wish-fulfilling doesn't mean it's absurdly op right away. For example, he could buy the first soul ring at the age of 600-700, then the age of the ring would increase on its own. Then why does it show the 10,000-year-old ring right away? There are a lot of great powers, won't they all come after him, won't everyone want this secret? so there is no logic in the story. As soon as the main character gained strength, he lost himself and immediately started to show off. Douluo's Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System I recommend the novel, which is both funny and main character op. A little spoiler: mc even makes trashgang and don3 get pregnant with a special water.
PENUNGGUNOVELEMAS:lol dude are you fans of trash Xiaogang? did you want normal story where the MC just got hundreds or something years old spirit ring? not OP mc then go to others fanfic thr authors said it was wish fullfilment are you and idiot? atleast if you want to mock or critic do your research first
well sorry for miscom i agree with you too in the eemotion lackness but what can you say from a Newbie author? a Great fanfic novel? you just too harsh to a newbie. if you like this you break this newbie passion
Taddena:bro do you have a problem understanding the meaning? where did i say i love yu xiaogang? The story may be wish-fulfilling, but it's one of the worst because the plot is bad and the characters lack emotion. Also, as I said, I love douluo fan-fics and I've read a lot. Just because a story is wish-fulfilling doesn't mean it's absurdly op right away. For example, he could buy the first soul ring at the age of 600-700, then the age of the ring would increase on its own. Then why does it show the 10,000-year-old ring right away? There are a lot of great powers, won't they all come after him, won't everyone want this secret? so there is no logic in the story. As soon as the main character gained strength, he lost himself and immediately started to show off. Douluo's Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System I recommend the novel, which is both funny and main character op. A little spoiler: mc even makes trashgang and don3 get pregnant with a special water.
Daoist_Longran23:well thank for you're supported but im not that weak for crying just from this critic im well yeah just a noob but well yeah thanks for your support
Dude, when you do something, you have to be ready for criticism. You also said that I was being harsh, but there is no insult in my criticism, I just said my honest thoughts. He may be a novice writer, but he can pay attention to the points I say and improve himself.
PENUNGGUNOVELEMAS:well sorry for miscom i agree with you too in the eemotion lackness but what can you say from a Newbie author? a Great fanfic novel? you just too harsh to a newbie. if you like this you break this newbie passion
Dude the author already said it to me why you talk it to me again, not all author have stable heart some have fragile heart some have Big heart i dont think you wrong but think about what you honest word before you said to somebody, why you rockhead at it?. you life not alone but with others too dont think you are always right even i always think if im right or not.
Taddena:Dude, when you do something, you have to be ready for criticism. You also said that I was being harsh, but there is no insult in my criticism, I just said my honest thoughts. He may be a novice writer, but he can pay attention to the points I say and improve himself.