10 chapters in and me reviewing on my fanfiction. Writing Quality - I would like to think that my writing Quality is up to par but... I really don't have many words in my English vocabulary. Sometimes, I use words repeatedly which lessens the immersion. (4/5) Story Development : I think I am doing good in that area. I am slowly diverging from the canon and I will also introduce some events due to butterfly effects soon. (5/5) Character Design : Hmmm...I don't know. I mean I would like to think my charcters to be three dimensional but it is still too soon to know. (4/5) Updating Stability - Atleast a chap per day. (5/5) World Background : It is a fanfiction regarding different worlds. In the weak hero world, I am explaining about the world properly and trying not to leave any plot holes. Still too soon to know (4/5) If you have any queries regarding anything related to my fanfiction, then you are free to ask. Thank you for reading!!!! (≧▽≦)
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COMMEMarinXGrayfia:IT'S ALL LIE!!!!!! A CHAPTER A DAY, WHERE IS IT????!!!!
The_Anonymous_User:harem?, after there are many beautiful female character in the manwha that i read and become fond of
Ballad:No Harem??? But it's Manhwas that's like the land of Beautiful Woman and NTR lol.
Ballad:No Harem??? But it's Manhwas that's like the land of Beautiful Woman and NTR lol.
I suggest you swipe shelly, or the girl that's after vinny or the blue haired girl with tats. (If You do romance in wind breaker ). ALso can I ask what happened to the girl that went after vinny? I stopped reading wind breaker for it to stack up and still haven't read It. The last chapter I read was that rich guy that met with vinny's mother on the last panel.
M7TH1C:No ntr? I gotta ask because Korea Is on another level when It comes to ntr. Like this of Japan as a king or queen then think of korea as a god or goddess of ntr.
M7TH1C:I suggest you swipe shelly, or the girl that's after vinny or the blue haired girl with tats. (If You do romance in wind breaker ). ALso can I ask what happened to the girl that went after vinny? I stopped reading wind breaker for it to stack up and still haven't read It. The last chapter I read was that rich guy that met with vinny's mother on the last panel.
East_Wind_Took_Me:Idk bro. I don't remember much. Btw, the love interest is Shelly Scott.
M7TH1C:I suggest you swipe shelly, or the girl that's after vinny or the blue haired girl with tats. (If You do romance in wind breaker ). ALso can I ask what happened to the girl that went after vinny? I stopped reading wind breaker for it to stack up and still haven't read It. The last chapter I read was that rich guy that met with vinny's mother on the last panel.