Review Detail of Gaasuja in Be Mine, I'm Yours

I think this story has great potential. The main character has a strong motive, and if the author explores it, it will become something that will attract readers. My suggestion is that it would be better for the author to tweak the synopsis to make it more concise. And in my opinion, the synopsis doesn't need to use dialogues, because in the end the reader will find it in the story itself.