The story is good and the written also. It was the first time reading a book with such short chapters, so I do not know what to feel about that. The story overall progresses great but since we have short chapters there is no time spent on the characters, world building or on the fighting itself. Overall I liked it and would like to see where it goes. more chapters please. Ghost is my MVP
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COMMEQueen_Endi:Thanks for the review, I still haven't finished your book, I'm a slow reader.😅 As for the short and rushed chapters of mine, I'll try to improve them. (Which will be hard cuz I have school.)