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Review Detail of schizocat in Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

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Everything was going well, the dialogues were brilliant, the pacing was good, character design was great. Until the Apostle arc. It felt a bit dragged out to me and the rewards did not feel gratifying at all.

Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

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In my defense, Apostles in Nasu are terrifying creatures, with the older ones rivaling Heroic Spirits themselves and the truly Ancient completely steam-rolling over most Servants. While Regul was a newly made Apostle, I had to show how powerful he was. It's part of lore-building. 😅