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Review Detail of DaoistuWutkh in Multiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial Tower

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Writing quality is close to perfect if we just consider it as grammar but i think it also encapsulate the level of immersion , clarity and choose of words though if i could, i would have given 3.5. because sometimes explanations are not really explanations it requires too much foreknowledge of not worldwide popular frenchises. Also author does not desribe a lot of things in visual enough and expects you to read it while opening various wikis , images from his dc server and so on. Are we reading a fiction novel or an academic book which doesn't explain it's terminology thinking you already know it. Story development is very problemetic here because of forced plot events. Also there is the problem with most plots doesn't end they just keep on scretching with questions left behind i can understand that mystery is a big part of the novel but there should be a balnce tothe whloe thing of" answers and new mysteries" in which this novel doesn't succeed. Character Design: Mc has a character type that i normally like the most which is "one that acts for his goal actively and can do the necessary firty work" but the problem here is i don't find it realistic that every other people in the novel being the way they are. Most people in the world of this story is spending a lot of time going through equal if not harsher lifes than out mc however compared to him these people have way weaker and cunning personalities. Updating stability: Considering the author having a real job and doing it as a hobby it is vey stable and i would have given 5 stars if not for the year long absence. World Background: The idea is an already tried and worked one which is world hopping and the usage of popular frenchises such as HP, ASOIAF, One piece etc... However the implementetion is very poor; he added some concepts and rules to glue all these frenchises but failed to make it clear what is what in his mind everything is clear and he thinks they are also clear for the readers but they are not and this makes the whole world Background truly complex and almost impossible to understand. There is also a problem in world currency , like there is an item in grade x which is worth 10.000 points and there is also an item in grade x that is worth 100.000.000. Grades are not clear and this ruins the immersion for me , i as a reader love to learn the general logic and grading-ranking-leveling of the world and imagine what would have happen if this and that happen in which this novel fails it truly never captivates you such that you imagine yourself in its world having that power and this skill and making money this way ... because it is not detailed and clearly explained. i have read up to around chapter 400 and stopped. The only reasons that kept me reading was my love of this genre taht i have read almost all i can find in the world hopping/infinity/multiverse; i even went as far as reading thousands of chapters of translating using chatGpt to read from raws. And also waiting for a brakpoint in which the feeling of congestion in me is released and it never happened Bye

Multiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial Tower

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MorningWood_Dao
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nice review, if what you said is true about the writing (even until ch400), then I'm pretty sure I'll get annoyed(possibly headache) if I read this novel. 👍