The story building for this world and the description of the characters are really well done! My one tip for this novel is that you space out your paragraphs more. Break up some information to build up a sense of suspense for the next line. Other than that your story is really well done and immersive! Added it to my library and keep up the good work!
Mourn_Shard
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