Review Detail of authortinnnnn in Darkness Of Hell

This is a very intriguing novel. I can see that why it is a worthy read. As for tips to make it a bit better...elaborate/specify/describe the details of 'Winston's clothes, the place etc. Cause from what I know about male novels, they tend to be detail-heavy on world building. But be sure to not put too much, and still focus on the events/scenes. Other than that hats to you 🥰🥰🥰