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Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

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Evaluation: Below Average. Tons of grammatical errors. Incorrectly placed 2nd-person-POV interaction. schema of MC & story Devt. are a bit forced & progression of story have tons of plot holes as well.

Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

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Sigh, just so I can improve in the future, what plot holes?