Review Detail of SJCTheLegacy in Deleted Story Again 아나요

Item: Deleted Story Again 아나요
Rating: 4.2

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SJCTheLegacyLv102yrSJCTheLegacy

The story itself is enjoyable, but there is something that's not explained but I'm sure it'll do if I read more, The world background seems a bit quite vague but like I said it'll tell itself if you keep reading. All in all, it's good on its own, but a little enhancement will not hurt

Deleted Story Again 아나요

Vienna_Gu

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SJCTheLegacyLv10SJCTheLegacy

It's good already, and unique just a little enhancement will do.[img=recommend]

Vienna_Gu:thank you for your review, i try to explain my story for readers. Maybe, this is an indonesian story which had translared to english,so you felt a little confuse also there are some grammar error too. Im sorry for that

2yr

Vienna_GuAuteurVienna_Gu

thank you for your review, i try to explain my story for readers. Maybe, this is an indonesian story which had translared to english,so you felt a little confuse also there are some grammar error too. Im sorry for that

2yr