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Review Detail of Emmanuel_Capricorn in In Danmachi with a Template system

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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv42yrEmmanuel_Capricorn

The idea of an MC with Natsu's power in Danmachi is good but the Author seriously need more experience..The writing quality is bad, the interactions are shallow l, the charaters are not protrayed properly and the plot and progress are forced and doesn't seem natural.. I advice the Author to not get down because of my low rating and try to improve...It is not the worse fanfic in this app and is quite intresting.. I recommend you try it if you have nothing else to read...It was not a waste of time for me but I don't have great time either.. Overall=3.2 stars

In Danmachi with a Template system

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ark_1
ark_1Auteurark_1

nah one bad rating doesn't bother me if there are more than enough good reviews and encouragement to become a better author 😁😁

ark_1
ark_1Auteurark_1

byw can you help me i want to see what ranking my fanfic is but dontnknow how to find it😅😅😅

Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4Emmanuel_Capricorn

you need at least 15000k words and you will get your ranking next week which is Monday...three days from now.. The ranking reset every week...power stone, is the moat promenent.. Collection is the book with the most amount of collection in a week..Its usually new books which just got realeased and not old ones.. Popular is the amount of new readers you get in a week...Again this is also for new books as the old ones already got all the views and their are no new viewers

ark_1:nah one bad rating doesn't bother me if there are more than enough good reviews and encouragement to become a better author 😁😁
ark_1
ark_1Auteurark_1

oh i see thank you

Emmanuel_Capricorn:you need at least 15000k words and you will get your ranking next week which is Monday...three days from now.. The ranking reset every week...power stone, is the moat promenent.. Collection is the book with the most amount of collection in a week..Its usually new books which just got realeased and not old ones.. Popular is the amount of new readers you get in a week...Again this is also for new books as the old ones already got all the views and their are no new viewers
Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4Emmanuel_Capricorn

ark_1:oh i see thank you
CottonBeau
CottonBeauLv13CottonBeau

glad I read the whole review cause I was gonna say writing a review that complains about an author having no experience makes no sense, but yeah I think for a first work, this could be a far worse fanfic than it is good luck author :3