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Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Give Me Your Heart, Not Blood! [BL]

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Overall it's a good read. Interesting ideas going around here. One thing that only needs some rework is the amount of the larger paragraphs, give paces between them so it's easier to read (especially for mobile readers) Keep writing, author.

Give Me Your Heart, Not Blood! [BL]

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