With a really powerful first chapter, the story gets interesting and makes you want to keep reading! The writing is amazing and the plot is just as good. Id like like have a clearer description of the character's physical appareance. That aside, the novel has no grammatical mistakes and the development isn't slow. I really want to keep reading and see where this goes! Good job, author!
ARKirby
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