Review Detail of Dao_of_Rebirth in the magnificent bearer of the peculiar book

Item: the magnificent bearer of the peculiar book
Rating: 3.2

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Dao_of_RebirthLv142yrDao_of_Rebirth

the story is nice but it seems to jump in places, causing the story to seem choppy. and what are even the dolls and if you explain the purpose of events it might help it flow easier

the magnificent bearer of the peculiar book

siopi

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siopiAuteursiopi

Thanks for your comment, I am trying to bring more content in the shortest time possible so I may have to rewrite some parts for better understanding, I will make an improved version of the first three chapters in the initial volume after bringing the first episode of volume two , so I will improve those chapters that I already have and I will try to bring a better understanding in the next arcs.

2yr

the_outhorLv3the_outhor

the mc is so op but so stupid he should hide he's ability or quirk so that other people won't be on guard against him especially star and stripes he should go to America and pretend to be a fan then copy her quirk

1yr