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Ppsantana_1
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I saw you want constructive criticism so I'll do my best Author-san. Spiderman's unique class idea was a good idea, but the equipment that came with him didn't like the webs that get stronger the higher the strength, I think it should be his natural webs that he generates like tobey's web , and the constant system nerfs I think it's good to add logic to his skills but these constant nerfs will make him much weaker than he should, the perks so ok the dungeons are great very good even the best thing I found, try to make a story background for each level of the dungeon I think it would be much better and there is a way to make him mess with technology like a scientist like the original peter, this would easily make him stronger without being dependent on the system that continues to nerf him science would make him strong even without his Spider-Man powers as an inventor for example why don't he create a technology that would be similar to Batman's utility belt. Anyway this is my review for this fanfic

Incomplete System in Marvel

Chaostic

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Chaostic
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Thank you

Deadrule_vivek
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do keep in mind that fanfics are mostly power fantasy , that's why readers get disappointed

Chaostic:Thank you