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Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Man?Monster?God?

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Pretty okay book in terms of ideas and concepts. Execution is a bit of a mix. On one end you got things being shown to you as opposed to being told, the direction is mysterious but not too far away from the initial outline. On the other hand paragraphs are as big as icebergs, so maybe it's best to keep 2-5 sentences per paragraph before giving a break. Pacing from the start is okay, but it can be better to provide some context or clues if the pacing is meant to be fast, better prepare the reader with what's to come for the next chapter. But with what's already good with ideas, maintain these positive things of this book, author.

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