I'd say bravo... I mean it's certainly a better story than mine, the writing style is... "interesting" to say the least, but there is no correct way to write so I can't say anything about that... but I'd say keep on writing, so far it seems interesting, the details pretty good, and overall I rate it 3.8 stars. So keep working, you seem to be doing good... so far.
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