Review Detail of ChocolateCat301 in Chronicles of Nirn

Since every author is doing this, I shall too. I really love writing, and I intend this to be amazing for all who read it. Please don't judge my writing style, but otherwise, critical comments are welcome, because I would like to improve anything I've missed, or did wrong. But also, I don't have much free time, so please don't expect very frequent updates. I don't want to make you guys drop the book, but writing is a lot more stressful than it seems, and getting lore to work out with the story I have planned is really hard. Please enjoy the book!