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Review Detail of Ice_Princesss in Oh My Demon Lord

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The story has potential however you need to work on your grammar. Remove unnecessary comma's and capitalise the first letter of your sentences (as I saw a few errors on that). Use Grammarly as it can assist you with punctuation and grammar. Overall, I like the story's plot. Good job and all the best!

Oh My Demon Lord

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thank you