Review Detail of Aeternabilis in The True Successor Of House Scamander (HP)
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It's an alright story but it is impossible to read. The grammar is just awful... it's like an mtl story. If this was cleaned up the story would be 1000% better. As would any story with bad grammar tbh xD
The True Successor Of House Scamander (HP)
Heinzbeansscranner
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I mean Grammarly can probably help with most of the stuff and make it much more readable. Do you proofread as well? Cause you even miss basic things such as capital letters and the i instead of I... Ofc you don't have to, as this is just my opinion... However, it will make a world of difference.
Heinzbeansscranner:Ooooof.... low blow man