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Adrian_Putra_3580
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My opinion the MC is childish he glare at ottar(who could kill him easly) because he Don't speak đŸ€” he not smart or cautios like a typical anime protagonist so i expected many of the mighty plot armor to save him i don't know if in the future he change it not problem for me hopely because he can learn from experience.and the last not least his system' is kinda stupid because a sytem who can talk back to his master is a flag a System must only do something if the the master ordered and do something if the MC is in danger and cannot command the system.oh and i hope he not a simp in the future(its Because he lost his mind when he see Freya it kinda a flag for međŸ€­đŸ˜€) because if him a simp/naive/boy Scout who follow a girl order because she is preety and get wall over because she is sexy,let go someone who want to kill him because she is preety and not because something smart .đŸ€źđŸ€ź. Its just my opinion don't be angry author 👌

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BlOoDDeMoN
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Don't worry he will not do everything that Freya ask him too. And he will surely grow smarter in future

Isak_Svartrapmo
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I hope this could be w wholesome mc x freya. give her some bs power or something in the next world

BlOoDDeMoN:Don't worry he will not do everything that Freya ask him too. And he will surely grow smarter in future
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Thanks