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YukiShiro55
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ok! so to begin, I only read up to 39 chapters and there was little to no changes…. the mc, in my opinion, replaces aurther and makes him a background character, most of the time the interactions with mc and his family feels awkward and confusing, it may just be me….. ANYWAYS!! other change’s so far are minimal, aurther dident kill big tree monster and dosent meet his dwarf friend (I forgotten if his friend is a dwarf) he also dosent get the beast will from the tree to give to tess…. other then that everything is the same, the love intrest for the mc…. well it not the one that I whould pick but whatever, atleast it not harem, grammer is ok and not manny misspelling so that’s a pulse, I‘m sure that later on there will be more changes and the story will improve but for those who still want to read…. don’t expect many changes at the begging. I personally will still read till the latest chapter.

Painㅤ

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YukiShiro55
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I think it's Claire Bladeheart... not really sure, dropped it so I forgot.

XSilentX:whos' the love interest ?
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whos' the love interest ?