Bit slow but getting good. Still might be a little early to add a review but after reading the latest chapter, the concept seems pretty cool. Writing is a decent quality and there's a decent bit of background slowly unfolding. The pacing could be done better, but I like the way it's been written so far. Looking forward to see how it goes, keep it up!
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