Review Detail of Aurora_Ryan in Xianxia: Why am I here?

hi, harem?

harem???

I hopes there’s no harem

is this harem? pls answer this time…

Not really

what do you mean?

There isn't

No

No

No

There isn't

How far have you gotten with it

I'm working on that the novel is long

I'm planning on reading this book in 8 days when I'm freed from exams cuz I wouldn't want to get addicted again while I have to study 😅

you still haven't replied to my question single female lead or more than one? more than one is harem

Yeah. Thought you were asking about harem sorry

sorry but I'm disgusted of harem so single fl or not

single fl

female lead is one introduced in the 1st chapter

The story is really confusing to me, not only because of the grammar, but also because the timeline is unclear(a lot of time-skip without much context), and there is no build up of anticipation at all, everything just happen unexpectedly. Plus some event end without conclusion, and the story already move on to the next phase. It all add up to the confusion of the reader. The story has good plot, but the way to write it need a bit of change. Add more context.