Review Detail of Lavolpe3 in I am a hybrid

Item: I am a hybrid
Rating: 4

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Lavolpe3Lv147mthLavolpe3

A very interesting story so far but I do think you need to slow down a little you are jumping around and it get confusing. I do love a good werewolf story so please slow down.

I am a hybrid

Ghaadha

Liked it!

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GhaadhaAuteurGhaadha

I will try to slow down. I move a little faster when I feel like I am losing interest in writing. But I will put your idea into consideration

2mth