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Review Detail of Crystillia in Being The Alpha Don's Lover

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A review of the first chapter. The first chapter clearly achieves two things: charachterisation of the main charachter, and a foundational understanding of the underlying worldbuiling of werewolves and humans, with how each society intergrates(or doesnt) with each other. For improvement, I would suggest either emphasising the mystery of the werewolves existence, if thats something you plan to focus on, or give the readers more insight into the male’s protagonist’s perspective. Well done though

Being The Alpha Don's Lover

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