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tbh with you, after reading the first few pages this story has to offer... it's not good, the word 'after' is being used over and over again like there's no tomorrow, the next second I noticed that, I immediately dropped this. by just seeing that the word ''after" is being overly used, it tells me that the author's vocabulary isn't that large. well, that's all, I do respect you for still updating, compared to me that drops whatever I'm writing when I get bored, so yeah, this is my review.

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Thank you for your review, but it is my first novel and I hadn't studied the pattern completely, but in the later chapters, I had improved that, so you could check that, but if you still don't like, then you are free to drop it.