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Review Detail of Crycks in I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

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didn’t reach 10th chapter because: writing is of bleeding eyes quality. story development is not natural at all, mc find a mineral and oh! the new customer need just that. character design, mc is a fool. he sell thing at stupid low price when he went to search everywhere to find price of everything. Even when customers are surprised he don’t understand. also first customer is an arrogant young master who suddenly become an heavenly bootlicking dog for mc. wont add more, my rating is not me spamming 1* everywhere but real result of each point. maybe things go better later but i didn’t reach there

I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

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