Review Detail of TheSpixa in TBD1231

From reading just the first paragraph, I already understood the fate of this story. This truly is the makings of a starlike story. The english in this, vocabulary and grammar, are immaculate. I haven’t even spotted one flow-breaking mistake. This is one of the books I can give the authors any feedback to improve on. It’s close to perfect. I get JK Rowling vibes from it. Wow. I’d describe the book in just one word. Wow. Great job author, I love the writing. Don’t doubt yourself and keep pushing through. :)