Review Detail of Daoist439849 in The Celestial Child (MLP Fanfic)

This story is honestly amazing I just love how the main character is done the only downside is that I don't know if some words are meant to be there or it was a mistake biased that it's just great I truly hope this story continues. ps if the author reads this I want them to know that they have a realy great vison and you use the Mlp characters and setting brilliantly keep up the hard work.