Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in Bond With The Demon Prince

The storyline is great and well thought. It's unique and intriguing. The characterization was also good, and so was the pace of the story development. The writing style was easy to read, and there weren't any grammatical errors. I would just like to suggest adding a little more details, especially during a conversation between characters. Sometimes it gets confusing who was talking to whom because the dialogues were left off without naming who the speaker was. The most notable error was only the misuse of punctuation marks and not using them during conversations. It's a great story and best of luck to the author!