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Review Detail of LastGod in Beyond Earth:The horizon

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LastGod
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There are many problems, it does get better in the later chapters, I'm in the 30s now. The problems I see in this. Is that any relationship he has within the worlds that he goes to will end when he goes to a different world. That limits the relationships he can have and how far those relationships can go. Meaning they can be friends, but they can't really be family. Even his mother and father don't really have the emotional connection. That they had in the first few chapters. Also, it seems he's always trying to improve, but he is never really making much progress. Like the author is trying to stretch the story longer without ever inserting anything new. Then there's some of the basic real big problems that have been showing up in a lot of fanfics lately. That's the description of the character being either lacking or non-existent. The description of things in the world like his IS, which is only said to be bulky and have triangle shapes on it somewhere and have drones. It kind of seems like you make him work really hard to invent things and make things and then gloss over them and have him. Just you start using them. It makes his invention and hard work seem ephemeral in a way. Luckily, I didn't drop this in the first chapters. Because the comedy that was injected by just having everybody be rude to the main character was not funny was kind of annoying. All in all, because he can't create any connections with the people that he's with. You can't have a girlfriend. You can't really have a sister. Can't really have a mother and father. Everybody can be kind of friends. But those friendships will end pretty soon once he leaves that world. It just makes it all seem wasted. Him helping Cecilia with cooking him. Getting close with any of the girls. It all seems wasted time and effort. Another issue would be that. After this world, he goes to another world where the same problems are repeated. He will work really hard to get stronger and make friends and allies then leave again to repeat again in the next world in the next. Now, I'm not sure how to solve that. That's a multi verse problem. The same problem happens with harems. Some of the problems can be fixed, like with the descriptions of the MC. And if you can't come up with a cool IS look that you like, just look one up on the internet and describe that and post a picture. I mean, this is fanfic. There's no rules against posting a picture to help people imagine the story better. If you can't find one, you can always use AI to create one. But there should be a lot of mech anime and AI pics to choose from.

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