Wow... This is an interesting book to read... I am amazed. This is going, awesome author. Hooked on this book. Waiting for the new updates... Do update quickly cant wait for the next chapter. Overall, a good book to recommend with good writing skills... Please keep it up:)

So far ....your book is interesting and nice!!!!!!! it bears a lot of potential..........just some minor errors that needs to be corrected,aside from that, its great.

despite of a insignificant typos here and there the book is good 👍. keep on writing and spend more time editing at the start. story has a huge potential

Most exciting story...❤📚👍👍 Naveen your are really great Continue it.. Good job 👏 Everyone Read this novel❤ 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 😉😉😉😉✌✌✌✌✌✌

I like your plot and characters. You need to concentrate on grammar I think. Otherwise its really nice. All the best for your work, do update regularly if possible.

In all fairness to the author, English clearly isn't their first language. So, the story in and of itself is good. It's relatively unique, and would be fun enough if I could understand it. Sadly, the story's grammar, sentence structure and bizarre writing style and flow make this a very difficult experience, as I was left guessing more times than not. That said, when I can understand the story, I do like it. 2.8/5

A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.

I have read the chapter and I was iddected to it on the get go. Hope you keep on writing it and complete the new world of wonders. Great start 👍👍👍👍

The story has great potential. it is simple and clear. the writing is easy to undresatand. just a bit of editing and this book could be a gem. good luck author