Review Detail of KingCristo in Epic of Plaiyin : Sun rising (Canceled)
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I must say. This far there's not very much content but that's alright I look forward to more in the future. Description over the characters is nice to get into, the passion the writer has for this world is clear and must be admired. The design and background are splendid, there's so much that can go into this world and I must honor that. However, a small downfall upon this story would have to be the writing quality. Certain mistakes are understandable, however I give the suggestion to read through your work before posting to catch any errors. besides that, the work is splendid and I look forward to reading more in the near future!
Epic of Plaiyin : Sun rising (Canceled)
KiaoSuvan
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KiaoSuvan:Thank you very much for your Review! I will try to take it slow and be more careful from now on for English is not my first language. THank you for your review!
KiaoSuvan:Thank you very much for your Review! I will try to take it slow and be more careful from now on for English is not my first language. THank you for your review!
Thank you again for your support! I really appreciate it for it really gives me the motivation to continue on this Ambitious Project of mine. I have reread the Early posted chapter and fix many mistakes I noticed thanks to your advice. I will make sure to carefully write from now on thank you and have fun!
KingCristo:Splendid jeep at it! I look forward to more updates!