Review Detail of SOMMO_ARCANO in In DC with probability manipulation

this ff does not look like a story but more like a diary of certain events of the protagonist, there are too many time jumps and little interaction both with the characters and how the story is developed, the good thing is that he used the wishes quite decently without getting too much nerf. the writing quality is ok just that I don't think this is a story because there are only some important events and we don't see any character growth, I hope the car improves or rewrites because personally it's not good, anyway for those who want a quick and easy reading where mc makes a dialogue a chapter is the right story. it is rare to find a dc story that is not abandoned I hope the car improves.