Review Detail of Laycans in Camino hacia la grandeza, solo con fuerza controlare mi destino

Here the author, although it may sound like an excuse, I am still a novice in the subject of writing and plot management. In my mind I design the story according to what will happen in the future and that's why there may be several plot holes, which, as the chapters go by, I try to fix. Even so, as an author I appreciate the time you took to write a review, greetings from the farthest place in the world.