The chapters were long per say. All in all, it was a nice read. With a slow start to build up the story, it was enjoyable. Though perfectionists will surely react to your grammar. Well not me, haha đ It was okay and you have your own style of writing. Polish it more and you will surely discover it in the future! Good luck on Spirity and I hope you will get what you deserve, Movie? TV series? name it! đ
Megan_Jean_Forest
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COMMEThank you very much for your review! For the grammar mistakes: I am sorry, but I am not a native english speaker so they are more or less unavoidable. But I try to improve and write with as few mistakes as possible. I am reading your works and I hope my mistakes will vanish in no time :). What I would like is an animation series and an app game, so I am trying really hard!
Megan_Jean_Forest:Thank you very much for your review! For the grammar mistakes: I am sorry, but I am not a native english speaker so they are more or less unavoidable. But I try to improve and write with as few mistakes as possible. I am reading your works and I hope my mistakes will vanish in no time :). What I would like is an animation series and an app game, so I am trying really hard!image