Review Detail of lilhawk in Sovereign of the Gods

Item: Sovereign of the Gods
Rating: 5

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lilhawkLv22yrlilhawk

This book is really well written. The start is unique and what I love is that. The MC has to fight for his things. It's not like his first cheat is the best in the universe. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing proofreading can't fix. Although the capitalization of letters can be a bit annoying Great story keep it up.

Sovereign of the Gods

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Kalki_gskAuteurKalki_gsk

got it

lilhawk: I meant sentences like LianHao. imo it should either be Lian Hao or Lianhao I think, i could be wrong

2yr

Kalki_gskAuteurKalki_gsk

I used the capitalization to stress volume or that they are shouting. How do you approach this in your novel?

2yr

lilhawkLv2lilhawk

I meant sentences like LianHao. imo it should either be Lian Hao or Lianhao I think, i could be wrong

Kalki_gsk:I used the capitalization to stress volume or that they are shouting. How do you approach this in your novel?

2yr