Review Detail of Master_Atlest in Blood Assimilation
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The novel i decent, the author for some reason felt the need to appease the wrong audiences wishes and it ruined the story for me, bare in mind i dropped at chapter 158, reason that i dropped after reaching this point are as stated, the main character is flawed in the way things are processed, there are too many secrets he is hiding and that just becomes boring, especially knowing that it would be revealed in some decade from now, i mean it takes more than 200 chapters to explain a few weeks, I myself was looking forward to the competition at the university but hey, i have to wait 300 or more chapters to even get there, then comes what annoys me the most since the beginning of this novel, HIS PARENTS ARE VERY INFLUENTIAL AND STRONG, yet this b*stard would make the most dumbest excuses to live the poor life. his decisions when it comes to power selection are great but his choices in life is trash. His abilities are good yes, but too much leaves us the reader bored and annoyed, he has op skills upon op skills yet fails to use them accordingly, he is strong already but yet focuses on things that are less important. you know this mc can just stay on the virtual arena a farm to become op, or he could go to underground fight clubs to gain the points, that is not even the main turn off of this story, the major disappointment is simply the power system, one minute they talk about his physic being S class but other ability is C or B maybe yet he is defeating people who have more experience than him, stronger than him and more numbered than him, he is defeating all those people who deem them self influential and strong, then why rush to get even stronger who is it that the mc is fighting, he has already proven the fact that he is above his peers and hid his power, he would probs do it on a more annoying level from now. the fight scenes are extremely long, i mean a chapter talked about a punch as if it is the whole focus of the story, don't get me started on the thinking that takes a chapter or 2 before he makes a move, THEN COMES the freaking monologing that takes hours, the character the main one is sh**, such an ability and yet can not even use them properly, HE HAS AUTHORITY OVER BLOOD, BUT BARELY USES IT, instead of him to focus on evolving himself or learning spells and increasing his energy and using his form more freely and properly, he wants to go through some life and death bull, this is why i hate Chinese novels. they ruin everything. DONT TELL ME IT'S NOT CHINESE WITH THOSE SHZZTY AS$ NAMES. why cant we readers get a good novel, like the "I Am An Imitator, Don't Show Me Your Skills" now that novel is something else, the character design was perfect, story perfect, everything is perfect in that story, it wasn't rushed and it wasn't slow. people make sure to not waste time trying to find meaning in anything for this novel is all over the place, parents are fine and calm, they still gave a roof over his head and food to eat, yet he complains become he got no attention? like a baby? what about the poor who face real issues? its a stupid logic. i am done with tis novel, author you better respond and improve if not i am not coming back and this review would go on every website so people don't waste their time. changing your story for the negative audience who want to change a character into something that not everyone likes, DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT ANTI HERO MEANS? A typical character arc of the anti-hero is that they grow into becoming a better person, but a villain will go in the opposite way., and you are making him a villain, he isn't becoming a better person, he has killed more times than he had when he wasn't awakened, he attacked when it wasn't required and cries about the problems his faces, how do you kill someone who spies on you and not even ask question to see if they are there for wrong reasons or not, you see what i mean by stupid decisions. well i speak facts.
Blood Assimilation
BadMindDarkRaven
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Thank you for sticking around until now. First let me addressed the fact that not everyone could understand each other's problems or sufferings, as you could only think of your own suffering, whether physically or mentally. Physically Randy wasn't abused by his parents, mentally he was overwhelmed with a sense of responsibility from his parents and he was even bullied mentally and physically in his school on multiple occasions. Normally, one would brood over their shortcomings, weakness, and or inferiority, but he didn't completely lose himself and kept pressing on with hope of someday achieving his goal. As for his character reaction to his parent's treatment, it wasn't on the level of blood boiling hatred where he'd kill them or anything. Hence, why he suppressed his true feelings and lived with his parents despite everything. After all. they used to care about him, the current events were puzzling to him. Furthermore, after finding out that there might be a reason to his treatment, he was more aggrieved; It was unfair to him, he thought since he thought it was simply because he hadn'tawakened. That aside, the power scaling is unique to him as he could receive a temporary buff of strength depending on the origin of his assimilated blood, so he could sometimes transcend his base/foundation strength temporarily, not that he was actually that strong permanently. Not to mention it takes time to enter each assimilated state. Also, at present, his abilities are not at their maximum potential and will gradually improve in the future. Find out in the later chapters. Finally, you don't have to worry about the story progression or it being changed or anything, as all I did was simply reveal ahead of time what I would have done later part of the story in a different way, although I will still show the other one... But well, you'll see if you stick around some more. If not, that's good too. In any case, thanks once again for taking your time read my novel. Have a nice day or evening.
Alright, the response alone already pulled me back, Thanks for addressing the problem I had, I guess you got me with the whole patience is key, I will be honest I was truly enjoying the story, its the eek that got me and it kept on adding, I cant expect him to make the best decisions after all it's not my story or life and I am only a spectator, I will carry on reading, I look forward to what you have planned author, surprise me.
BadMindDarkRaven:Thank you for sticking around until now. First let me addressed the fact that not everyone could understand each other's problems or sufferings, as you could only think of your own suffering, whether physically or mentally. Physically Randy wasn't abused by his parents, mentally he was overwhelmed with a sense of responsibility from his parents and he was even bullied mentally and physically in his school on multiple occasions. Normally, one would brood over their shortcomings, weakness, and or inferiority, but he didn't completely lose himself and kept pressing on with hope of someday achieving his goal. As for his character reaction to his parent's treatment, it wasn't on the level of blood boiling hatred where he'd kill them or anything. Hence, why he suppressed his true feelings and lived with his parents despite everything. After all. they used to care about him, the current events were puzzling to him. Furthermore, after finding out that there might be a reason to his treatment, he was more aggrieved; It was unfair to him, he thought since he thought it was simply because he hadn'tawakened. That aside, the power scaling is unique to him as he could receive a temporary buff of strength depending on the origin of his assimilated blood, so he could sometimes transcend his base/foundation strength temporarily, not that he was actually that strong permanently. Not to mention it takes time to enter each assimilated state. Also, at present, his abilities are not at their maximum potential and will gradually improve in the future. Find out in the later chapters. Finally, you don't have to worry about the story progression or it being changed or anything, as all I did was simply reveal ahead of time what I would have done later part of the story in a different way, although I will still show the other one... But well, you'll see if you stick around some more. If not, that's good too. In any case, thanks once again for taking your time read my novel. Have a nice day or evening.