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It's not bad, but the author goes out of his way to derail the flow of the story by adding a talking cat to the MC's travelling party. Yes, you read that correctly. A talking cat, in Game of Thrones....Just... why? It just ruins the flow of the story. Moreover, the cat is probably the most annoying character I've ever read, and doesn't contribute anything to the plot or character development. It could have been a great story. Well, if you can ignore the spelling and grammar mistakes, it could have been a great story. But it turned out a jumbled mess. I don't recommend reading this story unless you have a supernatural tolerance for annoying, pointless characters and deciphering MTL

GAME OF THRONES THE RISE OF THE BLACK MAGICIAN

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babysaya
babysayaAuteurbabysaya

Write your own fanfic and be happy, my friend. I at least am happy writing mine :P

Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

its good you actually take the criticism and learn from it....

babysaya:Write your own fanfic and be happy, my friend. I at least am happy writing mine :P
Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

I totally agree, the cat it seems is a Cheshire cat from Alice in wonderland. story really isn't worth the time to read.