Review Detail of Blood_Prince in A World belongs to the Black

Spoiler alert - dont read if you dont want to Look, if you can get past the many grammar mistakes and bad english, the story doesnt seem that bad and shows a lot of promise atleast until chapter 5 where bloodlines and a system is introduced and he decides to go with naruto bloodline and a few other things which in my opinion completly destroyed any potential this fiction had and turned it into one of the many horrible fan fictions on webnovel. P.S to the Author: ok so above was just my personal opinion on your story but from what ive seen of your work you have improved a lot over time and i want you to keep it up. also just wanted to say that most mash up fan fictions like what youve done here usually end up failing for one reason or another. though there are some people that like them. anyway keep up the good work