Review Detail of Steele in InSomnia: Dream Carnival

Hello readers! I know I should've posting something like this earlier but here's some things you should know before picking this story up, since it's different from most webnovels you might be used to on this platform: 1. This is my FIRST ever published work, so I'm using this project as a learning experience of sorts to get the ball rolling. I try my best to avoid plot holes, retcons and inconsistencies, but feel free to let me know what areas I can improve in whether it's pacing, dialogue, length etc. I had trouble establishing some things at the start, but it gets better. 2. This plot is rather unconventional compared to most fantasy/transmigration stories you're used to reading on Webnovel, so you might not be used to or familiar with this type of format. It's inspired by Disney films, surreal internet humour and psychology with some dark fantasy elements. If you're not comfortable reading something unique or novel (see what i did there? ahahahaha sorry) then you shouldn't give this a read. 3. Because of school/work I might not always have time to publish new chapters on a consistent basis besides maybe weekends. 4. This is technically a psychological thriller, so this will likely deal with some topics relating to mental health with the main protagonist such as depression and fear. If you're sensitive to anything relating to mental health/trauma or get frightened by such topics then I wouldn't recommend giving this a read. 5. I'm not completely new to writing as a whole, but I'm always open to new suggestions/ideas for how I can make this a better reading experience for readers. If you're reading, thank you for giving this a go. I have more plans moving forward, so I appreciate any and every piece of feedback to make better writing. Stay Blessed! -Steele