A must know before reading. If you are closed-minded religious person, don't read so that you won't get triggered. But if you are open minded, sure read this, it cool premise. I'm still at the 4th chapter but I can see the potential. Just don't be bothered by the cuts at paragraphs. Hmm... what else. The narration still lacks, I think as a reader. It has less details so I was just making the environment with what I think of hell. And yeah... details and all still lacks but the style is superb. Yeah... that's all I guess, will change after few chaoters.
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