Review Detail of DaoOfCookies in My Life as a Gamer Across the Multiverse(ENG)

Don't bother reading this. Writing Quality: I am having a stroke trying to read this => 2 Stars. Stability of Updates: I don't know, haven't checked => 4 Stars. Story Development: I don't like this ff but read it if you want => 1 Star. Character Design: MC is a fookin' retard => 1 Star. I'm gonna go World Background: Bland => 2 Stars