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Review Detail of Wade_Spencer in How I Became A Gods Successor

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I really liked the world-building for this novel but you need to work on the characters, the writing quality is very good. I feel like Aria has a bit of a dull personality so maybe you can make it more realistic, either than that, this is a good beginner novel.

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How I Became A Gods Successor

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Thank you for the tip! I'll continue to improve my writing over time so you'll have to be patient with me!