So far I am liking the development of the story. The written quality is great and easy to understand. Also I like the reason you gave on why the mc is naive. Good luck on your story author.

I like the concept, and ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) the how close he is with his family lol. Tbh the background story of how he met all his wives etc sounded more interesting than the current story since so much has happened prior, it takes a while to catch up to all the characters’ backstories and pasts. I would totally read that “prequel” if author will write one. Anyways, would be far more interesting to explore something beyond zombie invasion apocalypse plot. Also, much of the writing is written like a summary of things happened and I think it would be far better to write with more detail to “show” the reader what is happening rather than summarizing after the fact. There’s also too many characters introduced far too quickly. I think you should pace this better.

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too early to tell but its quite intresting i think too early to tell but its quite intresting i think too early to tell but its quite intresting i think

Muehehehehe nice concept i hope the execution in the future is gonna be good too and you know maybe you can add slice of life maybe its just a suggestion dont take it seriously broh

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Man, this story is pure sháite, the people giving 5 stars are people who don't know how the world works, I wrote a comment on ch. 2 or 3 of why. Read my comment and then try to enjoy this utter garbage. But the grammar is better than 90% of novels here.

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