Review Detail of Dunamis in Forging a Path Ahead

The 2nd sentence starts off on the first line and ends on the ninth.. Its full of rambling sentences and incoherent ideas that spill into each other. I cant compell myself to read past chapter 2 or find any interest in the info dumping about an inbred child. I think the overall topic for the story wasn't well thought out either probably the reason why this beginner attempt at a novel was dropped.