I greatly admired the realistic writing of the author. The passages were descriptive, though a little less reader friendly (just my humble opinion, no idea if it's the same for others). The way each character was introduce was really nice, and the flow of the plot was smooth. It seems like a good story and worth reading for sure!
guyfawkes
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COMMEguyfawkes:Hey thank you for the feedback. This is my first work so I really appreciate your advice on reader friendliness.